Well, Happy Thanksgiving to all!!!

I have continued to work on my paper, but it seems that I am getting slower on it because of repetition. It is hard to add parts without reading over the first 10 pages. I just found an article on the effect of not having classroom management and what that will do to teachers (burnout). I don’t know if I should add more types of classroom management techniques or if it will not add much substance to the whole paper.

I have been adding headers to my paper to help guide my reader. It has also helped me go back and read certain parts. I am hoping to get some input on how it is looking.

Summary of peer suggestions for my research

I remember in the past when I had to pass may paper for peer review; I would get very very nervous. Now, I enjoy it. It gives you ideas to improve your paper and it also help you see mistakes that you overlook.

Some of the suggestions from my peers:

• ·         Improve/ correct some of my grammar

• ·         Create a catching introduction that will catch my reader’s interest!

• ·         Split large paragraphs into smaller ones.

• ·         Backing up some of my quotes

They did find that my paper flowed in a nice way!  :) 

I know for a fact that I still have to add many of my resources to my page cited. I have really gotten into reading a lot and keeping notes in a notebook. I need to incorporate the information I have found to back up what I have already used in my paper.

I feel that I am on a role now. Now I can clearly see how someone must really narrow down what they are writing about because if it is too broad of a topic, you will end up with too much information that will not make sense.